Phillip Shabazz came to work with our 4th grade classes this past week on poetry. My favorite things I learned at school last week? Lunes! Mr. Shabazz came to our school to work with our 4th graders all week on poetry. I had never heard of lunes before, but he taught us.
Lune: three line poem with eleven words.
1st line: 3 words
2nd line: 5 words
3rd line: 3 words
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The lune has a title, a color and an action verb.
One of Mr. Shabazz's lunes:
Breakfast
Scrambled eggs, veggie
sausage, biscuits and gravy, sip
orange juice, good.
Another of Mr. Shabazz's lunes:
Hard
Means trying to
bite my green apple with
a loose tooth.
And yet another:
Insect
Red ladybug lands
on my warm pumpkin pie;
she wants dessert.
My lunes:
Spring
Redbud blooms lacy
pink smoke over new green.
Spring floats in.
Peaches
Sweet, yellow, cool,
exploding juicy in my mouth.
Drips sticky down.
Try it! It's fun!
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